Monday, January 19, 2009

Essay 2 Prewriting

Some ideas of some heroes that I might be able to write my essay on.

Jesus Christ
He is my hero because he is the reason for everything in my life. I describe and explain how he became my hero and why he still is. My religion is based upon him and also revolves around him.

Kobe Bryant
He is my favorite sports athlete and a big hero in my life. The reasons for this is that not only is he one of the best basketball players in NBA history but his attitude is great on and off the field. If I had a chance to be a professional sports player, I would undoubtebly choose to be like him.

My parents
They have been the biggest positive influence in my life. They have done everything that a good parent needs to do. Basically, in my opinion, they are the best parents in the world.

Of these three possibilities, I am going to choose my parents. This is because I beleive it is the best choice and the essay will not be too difficult.

My intro will be something like... Heroes of my life. I have a couple, but for me the clear choice are my parents. Three main reasons are...

First Paragraph

Second Paragraph

Third Paragraph

Conclusion

I am still working on my three reasons and I will show them in my draft.

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