Essay 1 Reflection

Essay one was a good way to start the year because it helped me know how the rest of the essay's will go. Also, I have seen plenty of things that I should and should not do. For example, I lacked my own perspective in Essay one. Also, I lacked focus on one idea. These things will help my grades on the rest of my essay's if I incorporate them in my writing. Some things that I should do are write freely and when I write my drafts or prewrite, I can't pause to correct things, so I should write it down and fix it later. Good start to the year!