What is it among the papers that you would like to draw attention to?
My papers have been well written in my opinion and if I fix my mistakes or weaknesses, my essays will be near perfect.
What qualities in the included papers reveal your strengths as a writer?
I have good grammar, good commentary for my topic sentences, good introduction with a nice hook.
What do you think you still need to work on?
I have some things that I still need to work on but I personally think that I am getting better with those things. My transitions in my essays need work and the flow of my essay. These things are important to have if you plan to have a nice essay. Also, my overuse of some words is a smaller problem that needs to be fixed.
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You have the general concept for the essay of mentioning your weaknesses while emphasizing your strengths. even if you know what your strengths are the reader may not. I see you list your strengths as good "hooks" grammar and topic sentences. You could give some examples of these things from the essays that you include in the portfolio along with this letter. You could also include one or two examples of your weaknesses as long as you clearly show that you are making a conscious effort to fix/improve. I read you mention that you over use some words. Be careful to proofread the letter to make sure that you don't repeat words to often are you will be emphasizing one of your weaknesses in a way you don't want to. Otherwise, I think what you have so far reflects your strengths well. Keep up the good work and don't wait until the last minute to finish the essay.
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