Essay 2 Reflection Questions

1. What is one thing that you like about your final draft (a certain example, how you summarized something, etc)?

One thing I liked about my final draft was that I had some things to change and when I did I thought that it sounded pretty good and that it turned out to be a pretty good essay. This was a result of the good comments from peer review and putting what we learned in class into my essay.

2. If you had another day to work on this draft, what would you focus on fixing?

If I had another day to work on my final draft, I would focus on making a better introduction paragraph and on making the body paragraphs a little longer. I would also try to improve the flow a little.

3. What are two or three important things you learned from doing this assignment?

Three important things I learned from this assignment. First, this was my first time writing a thesis in this class. Second, I learned how to perfect the hook or at least try. Lastly, I learned that if I write the rough draft by just writing down thoughts and ideas and the correcting later, I will write a much better final draft.